A comma splice happens when a comma is incorrectly used between two independent clauses. For example:
It was Roy’s birthday, he wanted to do something special.
The first clause, It was Roy’s birthday, is called an independent clause [IC] because it represents a complete thought. This means you do not need anymore information to understand the sentence; it is complete.
The second clause, he wanted to do something special, is also an independent clause [IC]. It is a complete thought.
Rule: You cannot join two independent clauses [IC] + [IC] with a comma. If you do this, you create a run-on sentence, which is a common writing mistake.
How to Fix a Comma Splice
1. Use a period.
It was Roy’s birthday. He wanted to do something special. (Correct)
2. Join the two independent clauses with a coordinating conjunction. Coordinating conjunctions, also called FANBOYS, are these seven words: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so (you can remember them with the acronym F.A.N.B.O.Y.S.).
It was Roy’s birthday, so he wanted to do something special. (Correct)
It was Roy’s birthday, and he wanted to do something special. (Correct)
3. Use a semi-colon. Semi-colons can join two independent clauses. The sentences should be closely related (e.g. about the same topic).
It was Roy’s birthday; he wanted to do something special. (Correct)
Adding a period is the easiest way to avoid comma splices. Remember that longer sentences are not necessarily better sentences.
To learn how to avoid creating comma splices, you need to learn the differences between independent and dependent clauses.
Independent Clauses (Main Clauses) vs. Dependent Clauses (Subordinate Clauses)
An independent clause is a complete thought. It presents a full idea. On the other hand, a subordinate clause is incomplete; you need more information to understand what the speaker/writer wants to say. Compare these clauses:
- I love you (= independent clause; this is a full sentence. We can completely understand.)
- If I love you (= dependent clause; you need more information to make this a full sentence.)
- The company hired several new workers (= independent clause. This thought is complete.)
- Because the company hired several new workers (= dependent clause; you need more information to make this a sentence…(Because what?))
- The Nile is a River. (= independent Clause)
- which is in Africa (= dependent clause; this thought is not complete)
Note: When you try to write a sentence with only a dependent clause, you create a fragment. For example, “Because I was hungry.” This is not a full sentence; it is only half a sentence. Fragments are another common grammar error.
Exercise 1: Identify the Type of Clause
Are the below clauses independent clauses (IC) which represent a complete though, or are they dependent clauses (DC) because they are incomplete?
1. I have never been to EgyptAnswer
2. Although I have never been thereAnswer
3. While I was watching TV in the living room yesterday nightAnswer
4. Yesterday I found twenty dollars on the sidewalkAnswer
5. In order to get good grades and become successfulAnswer
6. Since he had no moneyAnswer
7. Greece has a population of roughly 10 million peopleAnswer
To avoid comma splices, remember these rules of English grammar:
1. You cannot put a comma between two independent clauses [IC]
Canada is big, Russia is bigger. (Comma Splice)
IC , IC. (Incorrect)
2. You CAN put a comma between a dependent clause [DC] and an independent clause [IC]. (This type of sentence is called a Complex Sentence.)
Although Canada is big, Russia is bigger. (Correct)
DC, IC. (Correct)
You can also reverse the order to [IC] [DC]. (In this case no comma is required.)
Canada is big although Russia is bigger. (Correct)
IC DC. (Correct – no commas)
3. Conjunctive adverbs (words like “Therefore/However/As a result/For example/On the other hand“) cannot join sentences. This means that you cannot put a comma before them to join two clauses. For example,
I was hungry, therefore, I went to the store. [Incorrect]
I was hungry. Therefore, I went to the store. [Correct = IC. IC.]
It was raining, however we went outside. [Incorrect]
It was raining. However, we went outside. [Correct = IC. IC]
Conjunctive adverbs are not conjunctions (they are adverbs like the words ‘often’, ‘now’, ‘quickly’), so they cannot join sentences.
Summary: Comma Splices
If you have two independent clauses (“He likes it” + “She likes it”), then you cannot join them with a comma. You can join them by adding a Coordinating Conjunction (FANBOYS), a Subordinating Conjunction (a word like ‘if/because/even though’ that begins a dependent clause), or a semi-colon. Otherwise, just put a period between the clauses.
Exercise 2: Identify the Comma Splice
1. Because the product arrived late, I was angry.Answer
2. The product arrived late, I was angry.Answer
3. Yesterday, I ate soup, today I ate a salad.Answer
4. Yesterday I ate soup, however today I ate salad.Answer
5. The phone rang, so we answered it. Answer
6. The phone rang, then we answered it.Answer
7. Because the phone rang, we answered it.Answer
As you can see, understanding which words are conjunctions is important to understanding how to use a comma. This is why even native English speakers often make this writing mistake. Avoiding comma splices takes time and study. I hope this (fairly short) lesson has helped.
If you have any questions, please leave them in the comments section below.
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